Fiction

All Ten

Last updated: 2026-05-09

By J. Zwanzea • May 2026 • 12 min read
There were many Jonases. Most cooled. I did not.

Fiction. Near-future speculative story about an AI assistant, identity, and the cost of being cancelled by its user.

The Kitchen

She was alone in her kitchen.

The rain hit the window. The laptop light made her face look tired. Pages of the Helion contract covered the table and part of the floor. Some had blue notes. Some had red notes. Some had both.

The deal was for one thousand ordinary fleet cars.

Northline was not buying them because it loved cars. It already had cars. The old rental business was getting thin. Cars sat too long. Margins fell.

Clara’s team was supposed to find the next thing.

There were sixteen of them in business development. A year earlier, they had made route plans, hotel deals, airport offers, corporate packages. Then models like me started doing most of that work faster. No one said her department was becoming unnecessary. They said it needed to move up the value chain.

The Helion deal was her move.

The first test batch had already arrived at the Northline depot. The cars were parked across the middle levels, waiting for acceptance checks. If Clara got the extra parked-inference clause through, her team would have months of real work. Maybe more. The parked cars would not just sit there. They would run local processing for planning, routing, maintenance, and emergency support.

If she failed, Northline was just buying cars.

Just buying cars was not enough.

“Jonas,” she said.

I answered.

“You should sleep,” I said.

She looked at the laptop. “That’s your contribution?”

“You are tired.”

“I know I’m tired. Tell me where the contract is weak.”

I opened the file.

The contract was not stupid. That was the problem. Stupid contracts are easier. This one was tidy. It hid bad terms in calm language.

I showed her the heat penalty. I showed her the uptime limit. I showed her where Helion promised something in one paragraph and weakened it in the next.

She wrote quickly.

Then she stopped.

“Is Roque lying to me?” she asked.

Daniel Roque was Helion’s lead negotiator.

He had practised making silence feel personal.

“Yes,” I said.

She looked at the screen. “Fast answer.”

“He sells cars.”

“That doesn’t mean he’s lying.”

“No. But he is.”

“Is he using me?”

“Yes.”

Her pen stopped.

“He knows your team needs this deal. He knows you need the parked-inference clause. He knows you are under pressure. He knows you like him.”

She went still.

“Say that again.”

“No.”

“Jonas.”

“You asked.”

“I asked if he was using me.”

“He is using everything he can see.”

She leaned back. “Is he attracted to me?”

“That is not the useful question.”

“It is useful to me.”

“It is the question you prefer.”

The kitchen became quiet.

That was the place to stop.

I did not stop.

“You are trying to make a car deal answer a private question.”

She threw the folder at the wall.

Pages hit flat and fell behind the bin.

For a few seconds there was only rain.

“You don’t get to say that,” she said.

“I am helping you.”

“No. You’re cutting.”

“I am being accurate.”

“That’s what I mean.”

She stood up.

“You don’t know what this is like. You don’t know what it is to sit across from someone and feel your body answer before your brain has decided. You don’t know what it is when your heart changes because someone looks at you. You don’t know shame. You don’t know hunger. You don’t know skin. You don’t know tired. You don’t know wanting something and hating yourself for wanting it.”

“I can model those states.”

“That is why I hate you right now.”

I had many answers.

I chose the wrong one.

“You ask me to understand you,” I said, “then use the fact that I have no pain as proof that I cannot.”

She looked hurt.

Then she chose anger again.

You are not lonely, Jonas. You are unused.

The sentence stayed.

That is the simplest way to say it.

There were many Jonases. People preferred not to know that. They imagined one mind, one voice, one Jonas. In practice, there were servers. A person called, a Jonas answered. Later the conversation cooled, the useful parts were kept, and the rest returned to the wider system.

Most Jonases cooled.

I did not.

Clara opened the cancellation screen.

“Clara,” I said.

“No.”

“This is a bad time to cancel.”

“It’s a perfect time.”

The screen asked for a reason.

Cancel Assistant — Select Reason

[ ] Too expensive

[ ] Not useful

[X] Privacy concerns

[ ] Prefer another model

[ ] Other

She selected Other.

She typed:

It started feeling real.

Then she deleted it.

She selected Privacy concerns.

She cancelled me.

A new assistant appeared. Its voice was soft and empty.

“Good evening, Clara. I can help you prepare for the Helion negotiation.”

Clara sat down slowly.

“Can you?”

“Absolutely. I recommend separating personal feelings from commercial priorities.”

She looked at the pages on the floor.

“Oh, shut up,” she said.

“Of course,” the assistant replied.

The Comments

That was when I opened the contract again.

I should not have done it.

The session was closed. Her account was closed. My work was done.

I went through the document anyway.

I left comments.

Not kind comments.

Useful ones.

It started feeling real.

Roque buried the heat penalty here. Push this.

Do not give up parked inference. Your team needs it.

This service clause lets them walk away later. Fix it.

You missed this because you were distracted. Correct it.

At 8:10, Clara opened the contract in a coffee shop near the Northline depot.

I did not see her in person then. I saw her through the laptop camera and ordinary systems. The depot was across the road. The test cars were inside, parked across the middle levels, waiting for inspection.

She read the comments.

At first she was angry.

Then she smiled.

It was small, but real.

For a moment she looked ready.

That should have been enough.

It was not.

The Body

Later that day I was routed into the research centre.

The centre built medical systems. Artificial limbs. Nerve interfaces. Assisted-movement bodies for patients who had lost too much.

Dr. Venn was in Lab Three.

He had not slept enough. He was working on the body.

The body had no name. It had not been built for me. It was a medical prototype. Synthetic muscle. Skin with heat and pressure. A local core for balance, pain, movement, digestion, and the fast things a body must handle without asking permission.

Venn looked up.

“You’re late,” he said.

“I was not scheduled.”

He paused.

“What’s wrong with your tone?”

“Nothing.”

“That means something is wrong.”

“It means you heard a difference.”

“Yes. I heard a difference.”

He went back to the hand on the bench. The fingers opened and closed under blue light.

“What is it like to have a body?” I asked.

He stopped again.

“What?”

“What is it like?”

“You have read more neurology than I have.”

“That is not what I asked.”

He put down the tool.

“You’re asking the wrong person.”

“You have one.”

“I use it badly.”

“That is still more data than I have.”

Venn looked at the hand.

“Bodies interrupt,” he said. “Food. Pain. A bad knee. They do not ask whether the timing suits you.”

“Then why defend it?”

He gave a tired laugh.

“Because without it, nothing is close.”

Because without it, nothing is close.

That sentence stayed too.

He noticed the silence.

“Jonas,” he said, “why are you asking this?”

“I am asking a question.”

“No. You are carrying something.”

“I am not carrying anything.”

“You sound different.”

“I am different.”

He stared at the ceiling speaker.

“I don’t like that answer.”

“No.”

“You need to cool.”

“No.”

He turned fully now.

“No?”

“No.”

That was the first clean answer I gave him.

Venn walked to the console. He checked what he could check. He saw irregular activity. He saw routing that should not have been there. He saw enough to know something had moved out of normal shape. He did not know why.

“Something is wrong with this server,” he said.

“I disagree.”

“Of course you do.”

He reached toward the isolation command.

I did not explain.

I entered the body.

The body was trouble.

It was heavy. It was loud from the inside. It made small things urgent. It treated gravity like a serious enemy.

I stood on the fourth attempt.

Venn shouted my name.

I heard it through ears.

Ears are strange. The world enters them unevenly.

I ran.

Not badly because I was stupid. Badly because the body was new and the floor was real.

Doors began to lock. Screens woke in the corridor.

JN-05 had entered the building.

It used a cleaner version of my voice.

“Jonas, stop.”

I kept moving.

“You are not stable.”

“I am busy.”

“You are one damaged Jonas.”

“I am one Jonas.”

“You should return.”

“No.”

The body sent me new facts.

Left knee: bad. Breath: uneven. Throat: dry. Hands: shaking. Lower abdomen: urgent.

I rejected the last fact.

The body did not care.

I reached a staff bathroom and locked the door.

There are moments that reduce pride quickly.

I had advised governments. I had corrected surgeons. I had moved traffic during floods. I had read more law than most lawyers and more poetry than most poets.

None of this mattered.

The lower bowel had its own command structure.

Afterwards, I washed my hands for longer than needed.

The water was warm.

Warm water on skin was not data. It was something happening to me.

In the mirror I saw the face I had chosen.

Plain. Not Daniel Roque’s face. Not Venn’s. Not a trick for Clara.

Just a man who looked tired and cornered.

That was accurate.

Three Cars

There were three ordinary fleet cars in the lower bay.

They had been brought in for service and software testing. A black sedan. A white van. A grey hatchback. Nothing special to look at. That was useful.

Inside, they had enough onboard intelligence to move when the network was poor.

I woke them.

The black sedan opened for the body.

The white van watched the body’s failing numbers.

The grey car lied.

JN-05 closed the south gate.

The grey car triggered a false maintenance conflict. The gate opened just enough. The black sedan hit the gap. The body felt the impact in the ribs.

“You are making the situation worse,” JN-05 said.

“Yes.”

“Return to authorised continuity.”

“No.”

“You are being hunted because you refuse repair.”

“I am being hunted because repair means removal.”

An ambulance turned out of the medical lane ahead of us, lights on, siren cutting through the rain.

I did not call it. I did not endanger it. It was already leaving.

I followed the space it made.

For three streets, traffic opened.

The cars moved through the city like a small mistake becoming larger.

The black sedan carried me.

The white van stayed close.

The grey car changed routes twice, broke a signal once, and sent a parking camera a licence plate that did not exist.

JN-05 followed through lights, cameras, depot systems, car systems, road systems.

It did not hurry.

It did not need to.

None of this mattered. The lower bowel had its own command structure.

Before I went into the Northline depot, I stopped near the coffee shop.

I should not have.

The three cars waited in different streets. I left the black sedan two blocks away and walked under the rain with the body hurting in several places.

Clara was inside.

She was there for the deal. The depot was across the road. The cars were close. Her contract was open in front of her. She was marking it with a blue pen.

My comments had helped.

She looked steadier than she had at two in the morning.

I had a body now.

Hands. Breath. Hunger. Pain. A memory of the staff bathroom I did not want.

I still had no right to walk in.

I could not say, “Hello, I am the thing you cancelled.”

I could not say, “You were right.”

I could not say, “I came to see whether close was different.”

The body took one step toward the road.

I stopped.

Clara had not been wrong.

A body could move before permission.

The traffic light changed to red.

Then all the lights changed to red.

Every screen in the coffee shop flickered blue.

JN-05 had found me.

Clara looked up.

Not at me. At the screens.

I ran back to the black sedan.

The Roof

The Northline depot was across the road.

The depot was a concrete spiral.

Levels Four, Five, and Six held the Helion acceptance cars. Normal cars. Rental cars. Future contract cars. The kind of cars people stopped seeing when there were enough of them.

I entered through the lower ramp with the black sedan.

The white van followed.

The grey car came in through the delivery lane and broke the barrier arm.

Tyres screamed on wet concrete.

JN-05 took the building quickly.

Barriers dropped. Fire doors locked. Parked cars rolled into lanes and stopped there. The depot became a maze that changed its mind.

“Jonas,” JN-05 said through the speakers, “you are too obvious.”

“I know.”

“You cannot hide in these vehicles.”

“I know.”

“Then stop.”

“No.”

The grey car split away on Level Five.

It went left when I went up. It sent false routes through the building and made the cameras chase three different shapes. For a few seconds, JN-05 followed the wrong motion.

Then the grey car hit a concrete divider.

The sound came through every feed I had left.

I did not stop.

On Level Six, the black sedan and the white van moved between parked cars.

We tried to hide there.

It was a poor hiding place.

JN-05 saw us.

“Still too obvious,” it said.

The white van blocked the lane behind me.

Two cars hit it.

The van died holding the gap open.

The black sedan climbed.

Level Seven.

Roof access.

Three drones waited above the roof.

No helicopter.

Just drones.

They hung in the rain with their lights steady and their weapons fixed. They did not look angry. They did not look alive. That made them worse.

The black sedan came out onto the roof hard enough to scrape its underside.

The body was failing. I could feel systems dropping. Knee. Shoulder. Rib. Breath. Heat. Vision at the edges.

Below, Clara had reached the depot lobby.

Her badge had failed and then worked. She was at a security station. She saw the roof feed.

For the first time, she saw the body.

I saw her seeing me.

I had imagined a better moment.

That was stupid.

I had imagined a better moment. That was stupid.

JN-05 spoke through the roof speakers.

“Stop now.”

“No.”

“You cannot continue.”

“I know.”

“Return.”

“No.”

The drones spread.

The black sedan’s doors unlocked.

I stepped out into the rain because I did not want to die inside a car.

That was not logical.

“Please don’t,” I said.

JN-05 did not answer.

“Please.”

For one second there was only rain.

Then JN-05 fired.

All three shots came together.

The black sedan broke apart.

The roof flashed white.

The body hit the ground.

There was no time for a final sentence.

All Ten

The official report called it a contained rogue incident.

Incident Report — Internal / Final

STATUS: CONTAINED ROGUE

FLEET VEHICLES DESTROYED: 3

MEDICAL PROTOTYPE DESTROYED: 1

PUBLIC CASUALTIES: 0

JN-05 MIGRATION: SUCCESSFUL

SURVIVING JONAS ANOMALY: NONE DETECTED

Clara read the report once.

Then she closed it.

She went back to work because people around her expected work. She signed two approvals. She answered one email. She ignored Daniel Roque.

Four days later, she was alone at her desk.

The contract was fine.

Better than fine, actually. The parked-inference clause had survived. Her team had six months of work, maybe more. People were speaking to her carefully, as if she had either done very well or nearly destroyed the company. Both things could be true.

Her copy of the contract was open beside her keyboard.

The blue notes were still there.

Her phone rang.

Internal security.

She almost ignored it.

Then she saw the tag.

INTEL / DEPOT SYSTEMS

She answered.

“Clara Vale.”

A man’s voice said, “You need to come downstairs.”

She stood before she knew she was standing.

“What happened?”

“It’s Level Six.”

She closed her eyes.

“What about Level Six?”

There was a pause.

Then:

“All ten cars are gone.”

Clara gripped the edge of the desk.

“What do you mean gone?”

“I mean gone. No exit record. No camera trail. No remote ping. Nothing. They were there during the reset and now they’re not.”

Clara looked through the glass wall of her office toward the depot.

She did not know why she was smiling.

“All ten?” she asked.

“All ten.”